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UKArchive ID: 24636Repeat by Fitbin
Originally published on March 19, 2010 in Poetry

This is a little taste of the hectic, whirlwind rat-race that I am ensconced within.



walk
eat
read
fight
bathe
sleep
work
meet
dine
kiss
part
pine,
repeat

love
loathe
dread
resent
fear
hurt
curse
betray
cry
die
remember
forget,
repeat


talk
think
stare
lie
pretend
wish
dream
scream
fail
submit
despair
retreat,
repeat

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UKArchive ID: 24636
Archived comments for Repeat
sunken on 20-03-2010
Repeat
Read
liked
read
again
wondered
where
it
all
might
end...

Simon! Simon Cowell!? You're tea's getting cold. Ahem.

Nice work, fella. Punchy and different. A bit like a... er... a boxer in drag? This is possibly my worst comment of the year so far. Don't forget to vote. Thank you.

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his left nipple doubles as a dimmer switch

Author's Reply:
I am voting for none of the above I think.
I would vote for you though, as minister of the surreal.
This one is like a ladder, descending into a swamp of haste.

pdemitchell on 21-03-2010
Repeat
A
fine
thin
vertical
poem
that
transcends
the
do-list
on
life's
refrigerator
door

mitch

Author's Reply:
Thank you,
it did start as my day's todo list.
Then expanded into a wider venture.